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Nightmare
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:59:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Your face I see at night
Soon to be replaced
By fright
Nightmare...
I forget to fight
Your eyes I see by day
Soon to say goodbye
To the gateway
Nightmare...
I start to decay
Your lips I see in my dreams
Soon to slip
To the extream
Nightmare...
I wake up, to my screams
Ending another night
In paranoir,
I await
For another Nightmare,
That I must awake
Nightmare...
I awake
to a life
I hate
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ForeverAlone
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2005-01-26 22:59:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Nightmare
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:12:20 PM AEST (User
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this was really easy to understand, but then i just might be able to relate. amazing poem, and maybe soon you will have sweet dreams. |
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Re: Nightmare
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 09:43:53 AM AEST (User
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Great work here..I love your dark poems..The last stanza and the first I really was into..Good work. |
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Re: Nightmare
(User Rating: 1 ) by Val-Hundra on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 04:01:35 AM AEST (User
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Quite a dark feeling piece. I like it. So, what is the real nightmare? Your dreams or the waking life that you hate? |
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