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Crystal Princess
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:56:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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princess
on her
glass throne
once pure
clear
sparkling
crrystal is now
spotted with the handprints
from beatmarks
the turmoil
you hide
scratches
cannot be
rubbed out
the cracks are growing
the crystal crumbling
shards are flying
princess
climb
from your crystal cage
before you fall
into the broken glass
and splinter
yourself
before you
fall into the flames
seek
the One
who can
rescue you
from falling
into broken glass
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:14:46 PM AEST
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| amazing poem. but i rather like the idea without the princess in it and rewritten a little to make more sense without her in it, to make this a philosophical piece. |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:39:43 PM AEST
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| Wow girl, i love how you wrote this. It was very good. I read it twice... I seriously didn't want it to end! 5 ***** stars chica! |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by jjones12 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 12:08:31 AM AEST
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Amazing poem it really remides me of me. Except i'm not close to being a princess.
=Jen= |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:54:41 AM AEST
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Ohh i liked this a lot, very nicely writen i liked the message it has.
It's perfect, i did see some spelling errors which is nothing to worry about (i do it a lot too).
Anyways i live this Em.
Jane x |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:12:46 AM AEST
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Sometimes He allows us to fall so we can know the wonder of being lifted by Him. Sometimes it's the only way to grow.
Good write though. I know this feeling well.
Stitch |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:37:55 PM AEST
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Hmmm...
This is lovely Em. I love how you wrote this in a way that everyone can understand..
I love the style too.
But...maybe you should say what you think to that person/people properly?
Thoughtful write hun..
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:48:26 PM AEST
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" Seek the one who can rescue you " only u can rescue u, beautiful poem, nice flow 2 it . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:53:34 PM AEST
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Life can do this to many of us... but with the healing power of the Light, we can become what we never would have if it had not hurt us.
Very vivid piece, my friend. Well done.
Andrew |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:44:02 AM AEST
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Quick and urgent. Honest and caring. Very nice, Emily.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:36:37 AM AEST
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Beautifully written.
Most of the things people run after, are fading and transient... and then pain, disillusionment sets in...
But, as you've expressed here...there is Someone who rescues, and redeems.
Loved reading this one. |
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Re: Crystal Princess
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:26:40 PM AEST
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| Very stunning pice |
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