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The Third Obsidian Wish: Stasis
Contributed by
Maxximus
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:15:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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His face does not touch the night
It hovers in light clouds
Never dreaming
But always sleeping
Forced to embrace a nightmare eternal
Here is solace
A moments peace becomes his eternity
Words that never found his lips
Thoughts that were never granted
All these things are around him
They become
"Your face is mine to remember, how I do
long for yesterday... a time when time did
not matter, as time was nothing to us, we
who danced with Eternity."
"But that time is gone and it has grown so
cold. Death seems familiar now even as I
know it to be so far away."
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Maxximus
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2005-01-26 20:15:38]
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Re: The Third Obsidian Wish: Stasis
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by sojourner on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:48:15 PM AEST
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Very good poem,
Your poem reminds me of Susan,someone no longer in my life but forever in my heart.She has given up the ghost and has gone to the other side of the veil that seperates our two worlds,yet sometimes in the dark of the night I just know she is near,just waiting.
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Re: The Third Obsidian Wish: Stasis
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 02:07:00 AM AEST
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O.O
That was...quite abstract and convoluted.
I loved it.
*is speechless* |
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