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pretty girl?

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:00:41 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



broken glass-
red blood-
and voices finally silenced.
-seven years bad luck-
just can't take that look anymore,
her blue eyes starring back at me,
those eyes that see what i refuse to see,
that have seen what lies deep within my mind,
those eyes that know those dark things i've done,
saw so deep within.
i cracked her face,
the shards of glass now surround the floor,
attempt to make her stay no more.
my blood dripping,
draining from me,
bleed to make her go away,
bleed because i cannot stay.
her look pierces so deep-
deep within my soul-
and tells me things i just can't control.
she knows my fears,
and tells me things i don't want to hear.
i have to get her out of my head,
out of my mind,
to say what i've said.
i scream just to try and drown out the sound,
her voice- that voice i cannot stop.
never silence, no clearity, no more control
the mirror, that broken mirror,
her broken face, shaddered to the floor.
she will only return, she won't be gone for long,
if i'm right, or if i'm wrong,
i just don't know anymore.
her voice makes it hard to think,
just need to get her out.
we are too connected now,
there is no me without her...
and perhaps no her without me.
and so for clarity...
the glass, already wearing my blood,
that sharp glass that cuts so deep,
the glass that contains her face,
the face that cuts me, kills me, chills me
she is in that mirror, now shaddered on my floor,
and if she is to be no more,
the glass, pick it up, needs more blood
she needs my blood,
i need her gone
one solution nothing else
her face of glass against my wrist
it is death that i have kissed.




Copyright © hardcoreputa ... [ 2005-01-26 20:00:41]
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Re: pretty girl? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:04:37 PM AEST
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Sure sounds like the familiar down cycle to me. I hope it gets better for you, although I'm not sure that it ever goes away completely. Blessings.
(Oh and you expressed your inner voice well too.)


Re: pretty girl? (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:35:16 PM AEST
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wow. That is a really deep, truly amazing poem. I really liked it, and I can totally relate. I hope things get better for you. =)


Re: pretty girl? (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:05:46 PM AEST
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this is truly amazing...and very raw and honest. you have done a brilliant job and many can relate to this inner struggle...the person inside of us we dont like. a very sad but powerful and emotional write. love it.
hope for you


Re: pretty girl? (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:29:05 PM AEST
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All I can say is..... Wow
Great poem!!!




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