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the mexican
Contributed by
frannykilledzooey
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 06:52:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Cloudy tears
shade the green trees
the mexican is buzzing in the front yard
thinking far and wide
never right here
could have been smiling nice when you needed it
lay awake and sinking
waiting for the hangover
that finally kills you
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frannykilledzooey
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2005-01-26 18:52:29]
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Re: the mexican
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:50:46 PM AEST
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| I think the last three lines are the best ones. Keep writing. Cheers! |
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Re: the mexican
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:15:50 PM AEST
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| I live in a neighborhood with many mexican folks. The drinking gets so bad for some they end up getting hit by cars on a busy road. Good poem, sad, but good. |
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