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High School
Contributed by
fielding88
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 06:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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For all I’ve seen,
For all I’ve done,
For all the times I’ve had my fun.
For the long hours spent
During the best of the day,
From the start of September,
Past the end of May,
What is there truly left to say?
For all our fun and camaraderie,
For all we’ve done,
What we’ve grown to be.
For the times spent smiling,
Full of laugh and cheer,
For the times spent worrying,
Wrapped in our fear,
For those tests we worked so hard to complete,
For the special someone we just had to meet,
From a young child,
To growing child,
To the adult in you,
What is there truly left to do?
We’ve come so far,
This thought so clichéd,
What comes next will leave some dismayed.
Such a large part of our early lives,
Like our infancy,
Will be left here to die.
We can put it away,
But we can never forget
The things we did,
And the people we’ve met,
But without this one dagger to pierce us all,
Our lives have no peaks,
Just flat, nothing tall.
What would we be without a single fall?
For all I’ve seen,
For all I’ve done,
I will never forget the love of one
That dawned on me during a time of death.
That’s high school,
Where you never catch your breath.
Copyright ©
fielding88
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2005-01-26 18:04:17]
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Re: High School
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by redtempest13 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 06:23:51 PM AEST
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| Very well written.... :) |
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Re: High School
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:27:57 PM AEST
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nicely put.
there are those tho who wouldn't want to think of when they was in school,cause of being picked on ,everyones schools days wasn't all fun. |
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Re: High School
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by hardcoreputa on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:34:50 PM AEST
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| i am glad that you are able to see the good in high school. i was never able to while i was there. your poem flows beautifully and has a good rythme i liked it a lot ~Apryl |
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Re: High School
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by mysticaldancer on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 02:38:25 PM AEST
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| i agree! there are so many experiences in high shool that you would never want to miss! very well written! enjoyed it! |
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Re: High School
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:20:28 AM AEST
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Awesome poem!!! I am about to enter high school, and frankly I'm terrified, lol. But thank you for drawing such a fun-filled picture of high school... I can only hope mine is half as good! You really have talent!
*~Erin~* |
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Re: High School
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:56:32 PM AEST
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| you used to like this repeating type of set up eh? well you know what i think of that. i dont really like highschool, just seems like a waste of my time, and there really is nothing really worth it to go anymore. maybe next year will be better. but excellent discription, maybe i will have a fond memory.... for all the times that you are a no one...you become someone. |
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Re: High School
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 03:15:48 PM AEST
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Beautifully amazing write! Well expressed and full of emotion and feeling! I love this piece! This is amazing Marc. Wonderful write!
Again the only criticism I could think of for this piece would be structure, just play around and you never know what you could find.
Very fun and cheerful poem, kind of reminds me of the Vitamin C graduation song.
Nice write.
--amanda-- |
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