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Rumour of a sigh
Contributed by
Urizen
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 05:14:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Candles light this unforgiving endless sky,
my heart of desire passes you by,
The truth, your power resides in your melancholy eyes,
all I heard, was a rumour of a sigh.
No sounds or sights seem to appear,
no denials were uttered, there seemed nothing to fear,
you came and took my hate away,
the rumour of a sigh was all that remained.
But still the chance of love echos near,
Hiding in sleep, clothed in tears,
This special feeling came and held me close,
the rumour of a sigh from the one I want the most.
So spirits spin, and weave your dreams
across chasms deep and fields of green,
I'm full of pain, do you wonder why?
All I have left is this rumour of a sigh.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-01-26 17:14:31]
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Re: Rumour of a sigh
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 05:26:36 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. And interesting weave of emotional images and sound. The last two lines complete the picture. Keep writing. Blessings. |
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Re: Rumour of a sigh
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by Supergurl1071 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 07:31:14 PM AEST
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| Impressive. I love the way you built the lines and flowed the rhyming words together and the picture you painted was one that I can identify with... sometimes love hits us so hard. :) Keep up the good work! |
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