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Once
Contributed by
marshmalloska
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Once
Bitter lemon stars from a black void fell
In scorched clouds of fire, a glimpse of hell
And the sinking of the sun, hopes death knell
Now
Stars as bright as day, hang in my sky of night
Rifts in heaven, rip my sky in light
And in my sunset, shattered rainbows fight
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2005-01-26 12:45:06]
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Re: Once
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:49:13 PM AEST
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Sad and beautiful. You've said so much here. Lovely.
Stitch |
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Re: Once
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by Rashi4Evie66 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:02:25 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. I've never read anything like it. You really take the time to think about small things and make them imporatant. - Rashi4Evie66 |
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Re: Once
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:34:08 AM AEST
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What a terrific first post, marshmalloska! I like the imagery and word use here. Well done!
And... Welcome to YPDC! I hope you stick around for a while and continue posting : )
~SNM~ |
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Re: Once
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by Dawny on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:45:31 AM AEST
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Hi
This poem is really good, I love the descriptive imagery.
Welcome to ypdc
Love Dawny xxx |
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