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My Greatest Accomplishment
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:40:10 PM in AEST
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My Greatest Accomplishment
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My blood runs through your veins
And we share the same middle name
And from the moment you were conceived
A miracle of love was achieved
From your blue eyes that matches mine
A bond was created in little time
Rosy cheeks and strawberry hair
A miniature me was laying there
Your quavering lips matched my heart
As we both made a brand new start
Never had I experienced such incredible love
As my prayers were answered from God above
This precious child was mine to keep
I watched in amazement, rocking you to sleep
And a thought occurred to my wondering mind
What an incredible responsibility was suddenly mine
Two and a half years later, I still feel the same
I’m so very proud to share my last name
With this little boy, who now was grown
Into my greatest accomplishment, I call my own
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-01-26 12:40:10]
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Re: My Greatest Accomplishment
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:48:11 PM AEST
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It's wonderful the way that feeling grows.
You chronicle parenthood with such delicacy and depth.
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Re: My Greatest Accomplishment
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by Rashi4Evie66 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:14:29 PM AEST
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| I LOVE this poem. It shows that you have a certain joy that only you and your son share. He'll always love and appricite you for giving him that. You are a good rolemodel for these other dads out here.- Rashi4Evie66 |
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Re: My Greatest Accomplishment
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:22:43 PM AEST
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Ohh Jeff..somehow this made me cry..... sigh....
Sorry...Great write. Give Chris a great big hug and kiss for me.....
Jenni |
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