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Lofty Thoughts and Little words
Contributed by
Sinned
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:23:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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How I write you critize
You have not seen the world from my eyes
An expensive collage and a B.H.D.
So lucky an I to have my G.E.D.
Ellegant word in mind and pen
I search struggle and end with him
Simple word I put my thought through
This would never do for someone as you
Educated by the finest scholar
I feel like a cat or dog my mind is collard
Comments I get and deeply appericate
You look at me,but don't feel my fate
Uneducated this silly fool
He doesn't know the pen is a tool
Perhaps one should be a little contrite
I am especially pleased when children write I earned no degree in this working world Unlike you I am no scholar Mr.mr.you write so cool
Everything is so understood
Sinned
Copyright ©
Sinned
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2005-01-26 12:23:13]
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Re: Lofty Thoughts and Little words
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:44:03 PM AEST
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I have a tendency to point out spelling, because of my English teacher background, but the substance of the write is ALWAYS more important.
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Re: Lofty Thoughts and Little words
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by marshmalloska on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:57:41 PM AEST
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| good poem, i liked the title best of all though! |
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Re: Lofty Thoughts and Little words
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:52:14 AM AEST
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it is only through a mind one can acknowledge poetry... it is only by heart and soul one may breath it. hugs n' love nessa
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