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Love song
Contributed by
damien
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:58:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If every word I said would make you love,
I'd talk forever.
If this song I sing to you would make you happy,
I'd sing forever;
I feel so happy loving you and the love I have for you,
could make this heart beat forever.
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damien
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2005-01-26 08:58:48]
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Re: Love song
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by Ivy on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:01:39 AM AEST
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| Very very SWEET and LOVELY poem. Keep it up. :"> |
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Re: Love song
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:08:57 AM AEST
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this is lovely, it's length doesn't reduce it's depth.
a pleasure to read! x |
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Re: Love song
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:08:58 AM AEST
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this is lovely, it's length doesn't reduce it's depth.
a pleasure to read! x |
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Re: Love song
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:16:06 AM AEST
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i agree, short and sweet, very good. seems everyone has someone to love, which is good, especially this time of season. great job
the raven |
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Re: Love song
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:26:38 AM AEST
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| You take words I feel and twist them like a vine into poetry..great |
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Re: Love song
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by Ivy on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 08:20:55 AM AEST
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| WONDERFULL AND VERY BEAUTIFUL WRITE :"> |
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