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Fire for Eyes
Contributed by
YellowBeetleSB
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 04:35:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I once met a girl who had fire for eyes
She was too mad to live but too young to die
In walking she sang with short swift strides
And lit up the streets with her kindled eyes
Slight subtle and sad, she wept embers for tears
With soot on her face she’d been crying for years
Only pathos were felt from those who were near
But flinched at the sight of something so queer
What a burden she felt of her infernal gift
To the roof of St. Vincent’s alienated and adrift
Mad to live but eternally bereft
A blanket of ash was all that was left
Copyright ©
YellowBeetleSB
... [
2005-01-26 04:35:39]
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Re: Fire for Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:00:26 AM AEST
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wow, i loved it! great job, nice ryhmes, keep it up
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Re: Fire for Eyes
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by bluebird on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:08:15 AM AEST
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this is fantastic! : )
there is so much inner depth that can be pulled out.
~keep the faith~
bec |
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Re: Fire for Eyes
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by freckle on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:27:56 PM AEST
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| I loved your poem! Keep sending them! : ) |
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