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grains of my tombstone
Contributed by
bluebird
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 02:33:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everytime I take a step
my footprints erase,
it's only with the soreness of my feet
that I know I have been walking.
I can see my future in front of me
but it's so dark no image can take shape,
the light is on the way in which I came
but it's so blinding only memories can see.
What surrounds me now is just the present
even though at times it seems I haven't moved at all,
scenes from the past are still haunting me
never lay down and stay in their graves.
I know exactly where I want to go in life
but that path for me does not exist,
I walk upon the grains which make my tombstone
with every mistake engraves another letter.
There is no way for me to escape my name or date
or change what I have done,
I am lost between the darkness of my future
and the brightness of my past.
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bluebird
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2005-01-26 02:33:47]
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Re: grains of my tombstone
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 02:46:41 AM AEST
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Very creative writting.
Awesome.
hang tuff, friend.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: grains of my tombstone
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 02:54:33 AM AEST
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Wow this is such a good emotional write,
I liked the way you composed this poem.
Loved it.
Jane x |
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