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I Crumble At Your Feet
Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 12:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I crumbled at your feet.
The distant sound of your voice.
The beating of your calm heart at my chest,
Holding me from the pain outside.
The coldness of the floor retaliates,
You fell away from me.
An endless scream piercing the velvet skies.
Diamonds encrusted.
Remorse in your words,
Grimace in your yes.
You fell away,
Never to return.
I thought I had someone.
I thought you were there for me.
But then you fell away.
And said good-bye.
I cant just let go.
I can’t just let you say goodbye.
Your warmth leaving your blue eyes.
Tumble to your love.
Deep down inside of me
I know your still there.
I got you with me,
I know your hear.
Don’t leave me.
Don’t say goodbye.
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2002-12-07 00:15:00]
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Re: I Crumble At Your Feet
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by Gin on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 06:57:12 PM AEST
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| This is a great write one of which I can relate to. Thanks for sharing this one...keep em coming |
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Re: I Crumble At Your Feet
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 05:20:25 AM AEST
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Dear Frozensuicide @-<-<<
Another excellent write, your poem held my attention from the first all the way along, very beautiful...
Your writing friend always Nessa |
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