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A Heartbroken Soul Has Fun With Letters
Contributed by
TheForgottenMelody
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Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:21:13 PM in AEST
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I'm in love with a girl
Who dresses in pretty letters
She tore me off her name
So I wouldn't forget her
Six consonants and two little vowels
Two syllables that I sing and growl
Eating alphabet soup
I swallow the shapes
Tasting the name
That just drives me ape
I'm swimming in tomato without a safety "o"
The salty red pulls me in and drowns me below
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TheForgottenMelody
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2005-01-25 23:21:13]
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Re: A Heartbroken Soul Has Fun With Letters
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:53:05 PM AEST
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Re: A Heartbroken Soul Has Fun With Letters
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:44:29 AM AEST
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Re: A Heartbroken Soul Has Fun With Letters
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:58:05 AM AEST
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Wow aren't you something. That was very creative of you.
I liked it a lot, i liked the flow and the rhyme of it all.
Very nicely done. Lovely write.
Jane x |
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