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Nothing To Gain
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:31:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Deep inside, my heart is love
Surrounded in barbwire
And fence from above
The thorns are grave
The wounds never heal
All the pain inside
Is ever so real
Like a needle jabbed
In an open wound
Like a knife so deep
And twisting so soon
Like the blood that pours
And releases the pain
When there’s noting left
And nothing go gain
Copyright ©
tractorbabe
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2005-01-25 22:31:44]
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Re: Nothing To Gain
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:08:32 PM AEST
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Very sad but written very well.
Hope u feel better really soon.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Nothing To Gain
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:47:06 PM AEST
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| I love it, These are all the words I tried to put to paper in so many different poems, You susceeded in ONE. Amazing write |
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Re: Nothing To Gain
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:46:45 AM AEST
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| awww..just thinking of that gives me pain.. |
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Re: Nothing To Gain
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:12:46 AM AEST
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What a sad write, full of pain and sadness.
Great write.
Jane x |
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Re: Nothing To Gain
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by visualizing_life on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:26:26 PM AEST
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| i really like this one too...lol...good poem great flow to it...your love is sacrade and so is mine...but love ya always |
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