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My Dream
Contributed by
Tru2Myself
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Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:04:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Last night I was laying in bed
Thinking of the things you never said
I was thinking of how much I cared
And how I thought you did too
But now you wan't talk to me
I fell asleep thinking these things
And started to dream
And you were the theme
I was on my knees in the hall
I was crying, tears stained my face
I don't know why, maybe no reason at all
And you were standing tall in front of me
Laughing
Laughing at the fact I was in pain
Then I was dying
Lying on the floor in that hall
I was dying, in a painful way
And you were standing tall in front of me
Staring
Not laughing anymore, Not smiling at all
Nor were you crying, not sad at all
Just staring into my eyes
No expression at all, you didn't care
Would you care if I cried?
Would you care if I died?
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2005-01-25 22:04:13]
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Re: My Dream
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 04:35:34 PM AEST
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great expresions.. i can totally relate .. i cna tell you that your heart will mend though ! it will take ime but it will gradually ..
Love to you -
*~* Luckie Lynn *~* |
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Re: My Dream
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:58:32 PM AEST
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| very good poem you have here. for some reason it reminded me of eminem and his rhythmn. the question is would you care if you died? because if others do or do not, they dont lose a life, they lose you, while you lose your life and them. |
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