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Lies You Don't Believe
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:55:48 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Lies You Don't Believe
You see straight through me
And I'm afraid of what you see
You know the truth and don't believe
The lies I say so easily
All cards are on the table
And I've left myself open
To be vulnerable
With truth that's spoken
My thoughts are unclear
Anticipating the reality of fear
The truth has been spoken
And the fears are now broken
Because you accept me
Not what I wanted you to believe
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-25 21:55:48]
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Re: Lies You Don't Believe
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:02:15 PM AEST
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| Amazing post..Once again you have out done yourself with brillance |
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Re: Lies You Don't Believe
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by Whitelightning77 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:03:28 PM AEST
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Very nice and authentic.
A true sense of reaching for trust
Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Lies You Don't Believe
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:08:37 PM AEST
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Another and another and another and another
You dont stop do you ;) I wouldnt either if i could make words flow like you, |
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Re: Lies You Don't Believe
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:09:54 PM AEST
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Serious Innervision
Excellent.
The Wind.... |
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Re: Lies You Don't Believe
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by O7NeVeS on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:19:34 AM AEST
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| I agree with everyone else's comments! Awesome write! TD |
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Re: Lies You Don't Believe
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:34:27 AM AEST
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| i loved this it was truely great |
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Re: Lies You Don't Believe
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:15:47 AM AEST
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Wow that was brilliantly writen, Writen so well and i just love the way it all fits together.
Nice write and thanks for posting.
Jane x |
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