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Darkness In A Corner
Contributed by
frozensuicide
on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It feels, dark and lonely within my mind,
I feel the pain surging through my veins. . .
A pool of blood flowing,
From deep within my wounds.
Darkness in a corner,
Hear my faint cries.
Seize me in the darkness of nights,
Pierce my heart with pain.
Drowning in my pool of crimson blood,
Dying slowly with pale moon lightings. . .
Stars in heaven, clouds of darkness,
Heard my warning.
Darkness in a corner!
Copyright ©
frozensuicide
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2002-12-06 23:30:00]
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Re: Darkness In A Corner
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 12:21:43 AM AEST
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Hey, Lelu another awesome poem good job. I love the first line it states how the poem is going to be (that made sense to me!). However I think it ended to abruptly, but keep up these poems!
-Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Darkness In A Corner
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by Elisabeth on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 02:57:56 AM AEST
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Very descriptive. Enjoyed this write!
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Re: Darkness In A Corner
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by Sonibe on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 05:15:21 PM AEST
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| ....ah, yes....the feel of pain surging through your veins, darkness can be a good thing....this poem reminds me of a light case of internal insanity....keep up the good work..... |
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