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vacation
Contributed by
frannykilledzooey
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:29:15 PM in AEST
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i'm thinking that trust
is like sleeping in short pants
listening to you
talking about our
one hotel room beforehand
and the love we lost
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frannykilledzooey
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2005-01-25 18:29:15]
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Re: vacation
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:38:03 PM AEST
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| Good haiku. I enjoyed reading. :-) |
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Re: vacation
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by zenmind on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 07:05:40 PM AEST
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Wow, now this one really impressed me. This is great! It's really strange, morbid in a way. You seem to have a dark perspective on life, but not in a suicidal way....in a more creative/unique/interesting way. This poem makes me want to talk to you and figure out what is going on inside your head.
Be True,
zenmind |
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