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You're going out
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:12:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm sad and crying
You're dressing up to go out
I know we're miles apart
But I'm not going out
I'm feeling rage
Held back by this cage
I don't want you to go out
I won't say nothing
I won't keep you from having fun
But I'm sorry I can't be happy
It's just the jealous side talking
Trying to get out
I don't want to drive her away
I feel bad now
I think she's mad
I'm sorry go out
Have fun and please remember me
I love you
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2005-01-25 18:12:17]
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Re: You're going out
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:17:47 PM AEST
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| love it good write |
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Re: You're going out
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:50:55 PM AEST
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| Good write, but use spell check. =) |
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Re: You're going out
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by savedbydeath on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:35:54 PM AEST
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| aww i sorry if this is about me,u dont need to be jealous,i know we're miles apart but i feel so close to u,u should know that i aint going to do anything to hurt u,i love u and ur nothing like the dum bums around here,beautiful write i loved it |
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