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your love
Contributed by
waitingintheshadows
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
MothersDayPoems
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Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the Dark One's touch falls against my neck.
It wounds me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the wicked earth that is my prison.
In pain I hang my head
while Hell takes my hand.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon dead eyes.
This is your love
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2005-01-25 17:42:32]
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Re: your love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:45:47 PM AEST
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hi again,
very nice and touching,it seems to me the feeling is dark,but im sure 4 u theres a very beautiful one,even tho love is pain at times.t/c and keep it up.
Love always,
andrea |
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Re: your love
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by ElatedNBliss on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:47:56 PM AEST
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| i've come to the conclusion that love and hell work to gether... very nice write |
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Re: your love
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by ElatedNBliss on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:48:19 PM AEST
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| i've come to the conclusion that love and hell work to gether... very nice write |
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Re: your love
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 07:04:47 PM AEST
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| Again, all I have to say is wow. This is just soo...great. lol. |
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Re: your love
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by notwhatitseems on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:21:21 PM AEST
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| I imagine being pulled into death when I read this |
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Re: your love
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by notwhatitseems on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:21:24 PM AEST
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| I imagine being pulled into death when I read this |
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Re: your love
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:17:49 PM AEST
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nice poem..
take care
christina |
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