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i still love you
Contributed by
waitingintheshadows
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:41:28 PM in AEST
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what have you taken away?
a dark black shadowy cloud of pain as emotions twist.
once we drank of innocence,
childlike and glad-hearted,
but your desire died.
a horrific fever of agony -
drops of blood follow memory, follow pain,
love left to die.
in a haze of sorrow,
i still love you.
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waitingintheshadows
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2005-01-25 17:41:28]
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Re: i still love you
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by ElatedNBliss on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:49:51 PM AEST
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| i like this one as well...i can relate... nice write |
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Re: i still love you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:57:21 PM AEST
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hello,
aww,this is sad,yet so amazing how you can still love someone after all they put you through.very heartfelt.t/c.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: i still love you
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 07:03:33 PM AEST
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| ...wow...thats all I have to say.... |
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Re: i still love you
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by valek on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:16:58 PM AEST
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| emotion captured perfectly, great write... i'm speechless -Valek- |
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Re: i still love you
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:14:51 PM AEST
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I like this.. great poem..
take care
christina |
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