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soft tears
Contributed by
waitingintheshadows
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Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:33:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Soft tears
behind those eyes.
inside her
heart dies.
silent screams
fill her head.
hopes that she
will soon be dead.
i think i will just
slit my wrist.
or beat my face in
with my fist.
i want to go
in a painful way.
take me away
on this wretched day.
i want to just die
right here.
death is nothing
to fear.
please just take me
here and now.
this is what i want
just tell me how.
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waitingintheshadows
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2005-01-25 17:33:01]
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Re: soft tears
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:41:39 PM AEST
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On the technical side its well written..nice R&R. From an emotional point it's tragically sad and I hope you dont really feel this way. Life has a way of evening out..the good and the bad. Keep strong
Larry |
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Re: soft tears
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:42:56 PM AEST
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hey you,
i liked this very much,very emotional and good expressing your feelings.sad tho,don't loose hopes,whatever the case is,there's always a way out,trust me,there is,i can tell you're have such anice heart,t/c.
Love always,
andrea |
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Re: soft tears
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by ElatedNBliss on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:51:05 PM AEST
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hey i felt this way just the other day...so this poem really speaks to me
nice write... :) |
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Re: soft tears
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by jjones12 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:10:17 PM AEST
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Do you really feel that way? If so i do to but just remember god loves you.
=Jen=
PS great write
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Re: soft tears
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:13:42 PM AEST
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This is sad.. I have felt this way plenty of times.. great poem
take care
christina |
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