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Jaded pt 3
Contributed by
elatednbliss
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Today...
Honestly I don't know what today is or was...
I was just there, doing my job
doing what I was told
and in the back of my mind I just wanted to dissappear
be done away with
like the wrapper on a piece of candy
ripped open
crumbled and tossed to the side
like I was nothing
Life's sweet tooth just tore through me
taking out my inner
my sweet, my sugars
my sanity, my all
with my empty shell
floating on a cold dead breeze...
I've never seen a heart
so frosted and cracked as mine.
Copyright ©
elatednbliss
... [
2005-01-25 16:18:00]
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Re: Jaded pt 3
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by Minya on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 03:47:47 AM AEST
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| I like the part about life's sweet tooth tore through you. |
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Re: Jaded pt 3
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by Supergurl1071 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:29:13 PM AEST
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| Loved it- you completely captured what it's like to just float by and not really live-- keep writing! |
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Re: Jaded pt 3
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by flamingblade on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 02:51:51 PM AEST
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hhmmm
this one's shorter than the rest
but just as good |
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