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Angel of the Eighth
Contributed by
jan
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Her heart was felled by a silent grace
A wordless hymn she couldn’t trace
Light revealed its truest form
A fall from grace; she’d be reborn
Seeing what could not be seen
The world awoke the sacred dream
Her soul of rock, the angel moved
Chiseled by love until it smoothed
Within the heart that frees the mind
There lies a place beyond all time
Copyright ©
jan
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2005-01-25 14:15:00]
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Re: Angel of the Eighth
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by Maxximus on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:30:35 PM AEST
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| Very cool poem, the rhyme scheme holds the reader well. The light that exists within us all is something that cannot die and is itself ageless. The transition you placed upon it was good and I liked it very much as a whole. |
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Re: Angel of the Eighth
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:18:55 PM AEST
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| i think you did a great job, i love the way you rhymed in this one, keep writing! |
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Re: Angel of the Eighth
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:52:15 PM AEST
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| I like this. I like your rhymns and word usage. It all flows so well. |
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