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Life is so strange...
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 07:56:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Life is so strange
and constantly changes
but not always fair
Sometimes taking steps that
go absolutely nowhere
Like climbing but never to the top
In the same direction
and I never stop
feeling like I'm going backwards
feeling like I'm spiraling down
feeling like things will never turn around...
Life is so strange
and never quite fair
Beautiful tragedy seems to happen everywhere
As human mortal mistakes abound
the more we hide, the more is found
and feeling like it never stops
keeps me from getting to the top
In a personal conflict way too deep
my mind gets numb from a lack of sleep
and I still feel like I'm turned around
I still feel like I'm spiraling down
backwards into the ground...
Copyright ©
Red_October
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2005-01-25 07:56:04]
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Re: Life is so strange...
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:06:58 AM AEST
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Some whirlpools take forever to climb out of. I know this feeling well. You have described it with finesse.
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Re: Life is so strange...
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by cottoncandy on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 01:05:33 PM AEST
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| i loved it....so true...i often feel the same way...life is srtange isn't it? Keep your head up... you'll get to the top... |
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Re: Life is so strange...
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by cottoncandy on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 01:06:47 PM AEST
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| i loved it....so true...i often feel the same way...life is strange isn't it? Keep your head up... you'll get to the top... |
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Re: Life is so strange...
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:25:58 PM AEST
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Nice flow
well written. |
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