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Contributed by
visualizing_life
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Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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your my one and only
the one i dream about
the one i think about
the only one i want
your everything and more
your the person of my dreams
i care for you
and hope the same from you
you make me smile
just by looking at me
we always have a good time
you even make me happy
which is very rare in a person
nobody short of wonderful
could make me happy
and i hope i never loose you
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Re: you
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by ImJadedWhateverThatMeans on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:57:55 PM AEST
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| its a good poem.. i think if you added more detail, depending on what you were trying to get at, it would make the poem more interesting..good job though! |
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Re: you
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by jjones12 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:01:46 PM AEST
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Great Write! I love it, it is so self explanitory thanks for sharing!
=Jen= |
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Re: you
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by ElatedNBliss on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:05:14 PM AEST
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your a hopeless romantic...congrats! hope it works out
nice write |
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Re: you
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by tractorbabe on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:36:09 PM AEST
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| great poem..i still want to know who its bout... |
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Re: you
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:33:44 AM AEST
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That's such a sweet write, very nicely writen.
Jane x |
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Re: you
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by One on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 07:37:24 AM AEST
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beautiful is love. we take good care of it.
ONE |
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Re: you
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by tractorbabe on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:19:57 PM AEST
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| was this bout joey or brian? |
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