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Heart of Ice
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:14:37 PM in AEST
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Heart of Ice
This heart of ice
Can't be melted
This pain from it
Leaves me broken
I've tried to feel emotion
But I don't like the solution
Because pain isn't worth it
When I leave myself open
It's hard to change
And rearrange
Who I've been
When
I've been left broken
And hurt when open
Is pain really worth it?
When a heart of ice
Can't be melted
But can still be broken?
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Re: Heart of Ice
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by afterdark on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:23:51 PM AEST
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| Your amazing hun..I would throw you on an alter and sacrifice you to the poet god's.. |
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Re: Heart of Ice
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by ElatedNBliss on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:37:27 PM AEST
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Hey it's nice to know someone feels the same way. I dunno being heartless and cold really doesn't bother me...but that's jus my opinion.!
nice write! |
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Re: Heart of Ice
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:54:05 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write! I can't really say that I relate to much to it, being distant is something i'm not very good at, even when I try. But I still like this alot anyways! -Sami- |
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Re: Heart of Ice
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by fastestofthefast on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:18:24 PM AEST
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i think i understand. great work.
-eric |
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Re: Heart of Ice
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:47:54 PM AEST
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| brilliant,you are simply one of the best here. |
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Re: Heart of Ice
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:01:14 PM AEST
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| Yet another amazing write |
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Re: Heart of Ice
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:38:55 AM AEST
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A very gripping emotional write.
Very nicely writen and composed.
Great Write.
Jane x |
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Re: Heart of Ice
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:30:26 PM AEST
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| So much gorgeous emotion in this piece. I love it. |
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