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I once killed a man for his shoes, but it turns out they weren't even my size
Contributed by
Diatribe
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Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:17:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm in over my head
and I'm refusing to hold my breath.
you don't know
you don't notice
so, this is the deep end
where the sky meets the ocean
where I dream of resuscitation
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Diatribe
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2005-01-24 19:17:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I once killed a man for his shoes, but it turns out they weren't even my size
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:51:17 PM AEST (User
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This is wonderful, incredibly so. |
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Re: I once killed a man for his shoes, but it turns out they weren't even my size
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:53:37 PM AEST (User
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brilliant poem. i loved the title especially. but i think i love the poem even more than i like the title. so short, but still shows your talent as a writer. |
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Re: I once killed a man for his shoes, but it turns out they weren't even my size
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 01:15:04 AM AEST (User
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awesome shawyn!! lol i love the title |
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