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My soul dies
Contributed by
fairyfire1988
on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 06:13:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Holding hands,
your gentle kiss,
those are the kind of things i miss.
Sitting close,
your aching eyes,
when i remember you, my soul dies.
I touch your face,
you touch my hand,
this is never what i had planned.
You lean in close,
i close my eyes,
when i rember that, my soul dies.
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Re: My soul dies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 06:21:57 PM AEST (User
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So sad, yet written so beautifully. Well done. |
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Re: My soul dies
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 06:40:49 PM AEST (User
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so very sad but you've written it so well hope your ok.
Brandy |
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Re: My soul dies
(User Rating: 1 ) by STARGIRL on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:03:59 PM AEST (User
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wow... dats rele sad.. best poem ever tho.
Keep your head up, dont let him bring you down. |
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