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Falling
Contributed by
QueenEEliz33
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Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Falling
Somebody please catch me! I’m falling deeper and deeper , I’m so far down I can’t see the light. Does anyone
know I’m falling? Do they notice me? I’ve fallen to deep to tell, my mind is spinning, and it needs to stop! I
try to scream for help, but my voice is cracked, I try to climb, but my body’s seems detached. I try with all I
have , but my heart is too weak. I didn’t even try with all that I could, why? My whole self is lost; it’s been
crumpled, burned, and drained far too long. I’m dead. Who cares if this time I smoke a little too much, go a
little too far, I won’t worry if tomorrow I don’t wake up, I believe my body is ready to give up, when your
world is full of endless pain and emptiness there is nothing to see when you open your eyes. Because when
I open them I have no time to look around, my eyes are wet and blurred and the blanket of smoke seems
to never clear; ‘I’m falling on and on; deeper and deeper. My last words to the world would be: I’m sorry,
I’m scared, I should have …..
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Re: Falling
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by Rxqueen on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 05:24:44 PM AEST
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| I have noticed you write alot about drug addiction, but so do I... I can totally relate to many or your peices. This I liked because it reminded me of a freestyle write. I hope you can get yourself together sweetie. |
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Re: Falling
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:42:15 PM AEST
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I can completely comprehend your feelings and emotions. I've been through drug addiction and I know the ups and downs.... you expressed your self beautifully. Just know that you are not alone.
ALINA
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