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you
Contributed by
bibi
on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:17:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I closed my eyes and searched for you
Where to look I had no clue
I wanted just to see your face
To go back to that time that place
I wanted you to take me there
When we had lived without a care
I wanted just to hold your hand
So we could run and laugh again
and help me find the reason why
You went away left me behind
I wanted just to hear your voice
Talk to you and just rejoice
Spend some time just one more day
Tell you things I didn't say
I wanted just to know you knew
There is noone I love like you
I closed my eyes and searched for you
and hoped that you were searching too
Copyright ©
bibi
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2005-01-24 14:17:02]
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Re: you
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by craz2 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:19:50 PM AEST
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| I like this. I close my eyes and look alot. Good writing.a |
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Re: you
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by Broken_Wingz on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:35:13 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem. You did such a great job writing this. Hope to see more from you soon.
Krystal |
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Re: you
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 03:10:25 PM AEST
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I really liked this..I would suggest that you use commas though, to show feeling, as in this space..
I wanted just to see your face
To go back to that time, that place. |
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