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ur my lil girl 4eva
Contributed by
bluebird
on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:04:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you feel like givin up and everythings hopeless...
juss keep ya head up and continue to focus...
i know times are hard trust me i've been there too...
and words cant explain the s hit i went through, but you my lil gurl i'd do anything for you...
trust me the first guy who brakes your heart, it will be the last heart he brakes cuz ill rip him apart...
nah just kiddin but ill hurt him real bad..dont nobody make my lil gurl sad...
and im tellin you these guys can be scandlous, but you gotta stay strong cuz i know you can handle this...
live life happy every day as ur last, never get caught up with s hit from the past...
these words im speakin are really real, cuz you cant close your heart to things you dont wanna feel...
and the 1st time you get preassured hold your ground, stand tall, be that last domino standing baby gurl dont fall...
see all this stuff is nice to think that i could give my daughter some advice,but god had diffrent plans and ended up takin your life...
and when i die and go to heaven, promise me that you'll meet me at the gate, cuz no miscarrige can tare us apart, your my daughter its gotta be fate.... i love you
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Re: ur my lil girl 4eva
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:17:50 AM AEST
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| Wow, how emotional, felt the tears building up! So Sorry for your loss! This was a great write though and great flow! TD |
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Re: ur my lil girl 4eva
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by afterdark on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:23:15 AM AEST
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| Good work on the spell check thing..Really paid off so well. |
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