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Death Wish
Contributed by
Sassy
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:10:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It is the middle of the night
Here I stand with delight
Holding a knife above your bed
Knowing what you said
Knowing that you would not get a chance to scream
Also knowing this is not a dream
You hurt me bad
You thought I was just a fad
That I was something you could throw away
Guess what, not today buddy. Not today
I will not be treated this way
You have no say
In my life
As I slowly lower my knife,
You look up at me
Can’t you see?
After what you said
You deserve to be dead
Copyright ©
Sassy
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2005-01-23 22:10:39]
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Re: Death Wish
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:13:49 PM AEST
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| haha, if i offed everyone that i thought deserved to die, only about 5 people would be alive, and even they wouldnt be alive for long. keep posting. =] |
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Re: Death Wish
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:04:07 AM AEST
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| Excellent write intense and dark, cool poem. |
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Re: Death Wish
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by secretwind on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 11:46:07 AM AEST
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| beautifully dark |
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Re: Death Wish
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by ArmyBrat on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:58:03 PM AEST
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| You sound like you're talking about your ex trust me that's the way i feel when my boyfriend broke up with me. |
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Re: Death Wish
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by ArmyBrat on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:58:05 PM AEST
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| You sound like you're talking about your ex trust me that's the way i feel when my boyfriend broke up with me. |
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