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The Five Foot Leap
Contributed by
SeptChill
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:33:40 PM in AEST
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The Five Foot Leap
Katherine Faigen
30 inches of pure powder
I will jump the bank of plowed snow
Back up to give myself some room
Paw the ground; just for show
With reckless abandon I run forth
My arms swinging
battle cry ringing
I leap and tuck my feet
I see
The snow, so white beneath me
A cloud of coldness, freshness, sweet
And then I hit
The snow erupts
I'm in a pit
All covered up
I cannot breath my face is numb
My dad cries out, "Now that was dumb!"
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Re: The Five Foot Leap
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 08:02:48 PM AEST
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| Cute....and something I would do |
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Re: The Five Foot Leap
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:07:59 AM AEST
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Geez, you know - this makes me realize what is lost sometimes in the process of "growing up". Yes indeed - you certainly captured it. Well done!
A grown up that needs to leap more often,
SNM |
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