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Lust
Contributed by
freckle
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:21:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lust
Starts small
yet persistant
Grows and
grows
Consuming
thoughts
and
reasoning
Demands
satisfaction
Fulfills
Gloriously!
Then settles,
small
content
Waiting
To be born
again.
Copyright ©
freckle
... [
2005-01-23 19:21:04]
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Re: Lust
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by cottoncandy on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:36:00 PM AEST
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I like your style...i loved the poem!
Diana |
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Re: Lust
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 08:07:26 PM AEST
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| Lovely write...and definitely one to think about and compare |
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Re: Lust
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 09:55:02 PM AEST
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| Again another stunning poem..... a true talent! |
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Re: Lust
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:39:27 PM AEST
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| no wonder people get lust and love mixed up. |
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Re: Lust
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by outsider on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:09:17 AM AEST
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| Nice style, you say a lot with a little which is good. |
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Re: Lust
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:45:59 AM AEST
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Ohh that was a good write, very short but i liked it.
Jane x |
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Re: Lust
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by bareforeyou on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:48:48 PM AEST
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| You said so much in the least amount of words..greeeat job!!! |
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Re: Lust
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:42:43 PM AEST
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I like this too ... I wonder though ... what of the other emotions and actions that can be initiated by lust ? This seems to reflect the positive or nonchalant side of lust. I wonder how you would portray ... say the guilt, or remorse that such acts can generate ....
Well written Carol, sometimes ... as you put it ... nuff said. I liked this one.
Nazzy ~ |
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