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Left of me

Contributed by Unabletoforget on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:04:10 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



lost in a pointless stance
i never had a chance
going through a relapse
waiting for it to pass
waiting for its return

the mark for wich i yurne for
i dont want to learn more
open the door
you'll never find
the thoughts hidden in my mind

rewind to find a past that's undescribable
it eats at me like some sort of cannable
unforgivable/ relivable,some things you cant stop
unable to get over the ever growing top
mop up what's left of me

pick up little parts of me
nothing left inside of me
but the unwanted memories
*wish i could leave
the part that is left of me*

unsee the pain they caused
paused in that part of time
reminds me of the shame
the same hidden thoughts
caught up in the disorder

falling over the border
last quarter of my sanity
wishing you'd run from me
locked behind the bars of my memories
life can be better but you cant see

for me that's impossible
too Plausible it'll get worse
too close/ about to burst
it hurts my hope
put my head through a rope

note my hate
give it to me strait
you ***** used me for bait
how could you relate
wait there's more

dig deep into my core
it's all gore gone bad
i'm jealous of wat i could of had
mad at my stupidity
it consumes all of me
*wish i could leave
the part that is left of me*




Copyright © Unabletoforget ... [ 2005-01-23 19:04:10]
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Re: Left of me (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:13:50 AM AEST
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well it sucks that i am the first to comment on this beautiful write, but it touched me like no other has to date. i had a friend who was fighting to stay clean and in his fight he said goodbye to me just to keep me from being there when he went insane as he put it. but i cried when i read this. I give it a 10


Re: Left of me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 07:26:16 PM AEST
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This was incredible. Truely an amazing peice of writing. It really got to me... I loved every line of it, every single word you wrote. Maybe I can relate all too well, but that isn't even why I love it so much. The way and style in which you wrote this is so cool. Thank you so much for sharing this, I as well give you a ten!!!! You seriously gave me the chills...




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