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Winter's Darkness
Contributed by
fastestofthefast
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 06:56:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The icy wind pierces the tender flesh
A blast of frigid air stings my face
Frost collects on the wilted petals of summer’s flowers
The dark sky blanketed a gloomy winter peak
A cold freezing wall of misery sweeps across the mountain tops
Escaping the bitter winds by indulging in hibernation
Bright icicle diamonds crunch under foot
Quiet and tranquil each night is bathed in silence.
Copyright ©
fastestofthefast
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2005-01-23 18:56:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Winter's Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:01:33 PM AEST (User
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Winter is one of the most awkward seaons...so bitter and so beautiful |
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Re: Winter's Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:01:52 PM AEST (User
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I love your use of imagery. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Winter's Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:42:37 PM AEST (User
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Ooooooh! I like this very much. I like the last two lines best. Anxious for more.
Stitch |
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Re: Winter's Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 10:45:56 PM AEST (User
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excellent poem. very nice imagery. and very good verses. i will never be able to say i like winter, but i can say i like your poem. |
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Re: Winter's Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by secretwind on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 11:43:03 AM AEST (User
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Great poem
vivid
is this flow.
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Re: Winter's Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by jbutler05 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:49:19 PM AEST (User
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hey eric its jordan this poem is really confusing beacause you used too large of words...lol. CYA later i might post poems on here but i dont know |
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