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An Autum Day in the Park
Contributed by
fastestofthefast
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 06:52:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I love to run around the park all day
The trees and plants create a perfect scene
On sunny days my friends and I do play
While diving for a ball my knees turn green
The children fly their kites high in the sky
And families gather to mature and bond
Some nature lovers enjoy a bird’s cry
While others feed the ducks in the blue pond
Wind blows the leaves from the top of the tree
The yellow and red paint the curving path
The days becoming shorter and ducks flee
The small plants must withstand the winter’s wrath
The foliage vibrant sets one in a trance
But soon gone like a summer time romance.
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fastestofthefast
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2005-01-23 18:52:36]
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Re: An Autum Day in the Park
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:00:26 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Great imagery. It made me smile. |
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Re: An Autum Day in the Park
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:27:07 PM AEST
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| good sonnet. we have a new shakespeare on the site with these i suppose. i never was one to like shakespeare...the most i ever like in his works are probably a line or two here or there. but welcome here. i forgot to minchin that the other times. =] |
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