|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
cold heartless
Contributed by
Keila
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:51:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Luscious velvet dripping dropping,
Running gently to the floor.
Silken beauty darkness against the paleness,
Angry warmth against the cold.
The crimson velvet slowly creeping,
Creeping crawling to the floor.
The dark black liquid running growing,
Growing cold now on the floor.
The cold heartless torment,
only felt moments before,
Now is cold going under the door.
The glorious slender silver dagger
A cruel cold vicious, forgiving soul,
Rips through the pitiful frailty,
Setting free the poor tormented soul.
It then tells you it’s not the answer,
As you lie bleeding on the floor.
For now you soul lies dammed now,
And for Eternity more.
Copyright ©
Keila
... [
2005-01-23 17:51:05] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: cold heartless
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 12:53:54 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very intence, and well written great style u have . . .
Dorian Chambers |
|
|
Re: cold heartless
(User Rating: 1 ) by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:43:12 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
flows very well. and the alliteration gives it a such a suitable rhythym. |
|
|
|