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Wasnt Ment To Be
Contributed by
devine_xox
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:38:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sick of explaining
My feelings are painfully hurt
Trying to deny
All the love I ever felt
Reminiscing of every moment
Wishing i would forget
All the promises you made
All the times that I regret
Giving you my all
Just to be played
My heart in a million pieces
To you I was a game
Like a puzzle of that jigsaw
A picture once complete
Now shattered and broken
Iv lost pieces from that scene
To you it might have been a promise
You could not commit
I’m weak from all the sorrow
It wasn’t forever for you and me.
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devine_xox
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2005-01-23 16:38:23]
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Re: Wasnt Ment To Be
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 01:43:24 PM AEST
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i was realy taken by the last line, a real heart breaker, wish u well . . .
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Re: Wasnt Ment To Be
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by Urizen on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:39:40 PM AEST
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| it's good, I liked the imagery |
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