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heartbroke
Contributed by
bebe20071
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:27:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Please this time
let me say what's on my mind
why did you leave me
why didn't you set me free
you took away my heart
and broke it to million parts
you made me cry
and took away my will to try
you cheat on me
and lie to me
you could have said we aren;t meant to be
and you would have never hurted me
but now i am here with tears
and now is you and men that i fear
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Re: heartbroke
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by dark_descent on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:32:03 PM AEST
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| men eh? cant live with 'em, cant live without 'em. this is a poem that a lotta people can relate to. good write! |
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Re: heartbroke
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by sick_n_twisted on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:36:30 PM AEST
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| you'll get over it you can be happy with out him and you will find some one who doesnt cheat on you and lie to you love will find you...great write! |
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Re: heartbroke
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:37:08 PM AEST
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you could have said we aren;t meant to be
and you would have never hurt me
but now i am here with tears
and now it is you and men I fear
(if they can send one man to the moon...
why can't they send ...all men to the moon???
LOL) good write..
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Re: heartbroke
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:05:19 PM AEST
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| And all Women are victims..Yeah..Your post is good for what the subject is..I do disagree with most of the fellow comment makers here..But then again..My glass if here is always half empty.. |
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Re: heartbroke
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:11:02 PM AEST
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It will be hard t trust again i know but one day you will find your prince
great write
tell your sis i say hi |
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