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Doorway to Eternity
Contributed by
Keila
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:47:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A twisted world
torn and black,
rotten and burned it is full of pain.
Create a place just for you,
a man driving a train,
not so ordinary, show you a miracle
a rain so strong,
wash away the bad
to make new and good.
A river wild takes the pain,
shows me the doors.
I open the doors,
eternity is stretched out
at my feet an ocean clear and blue
becomes one with the sky
mingled in the moment,
two as one, the sun smiles
and embraces me takes me in holding
me like a friend or a lover
this is the pathway for eternity
the world for happiness.
Copyright ©
Keila
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2005-01-23 13:47:41]
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Re: Doorway to Eternity
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:39:51 PM AEST
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| you have an interesting style, just as you do with dreams. but im not one that is able to say anything... |
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Re: Doorway to Eternity
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by Lips on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 04:25:35 AM AEST
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| Hmm I like the place you take me too! |
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