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The Brook
Contributed by
Lee
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:45:29 PM in AEST
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You've reached the brook
The brook
The brook
The lonely brook
At your reflection,
You took a look
Came out lookin' like no one cared
You turned into a bird
Bird without feathers
You ain't got it all together
Your land of supple lovin' seems to be bare
Why don't I let you?
Why don't I let you?
You know I won't forget you
You know I won't forget you
Why don't I let you move on?
You've lost lovin' for me and it just seems wrong
But you
You won't let us go
You're a pinchin' for an inch on love
And itchin' for a livin'
You say "I may be drained
Still I've got love the same"
All you wanted was love
Now the day is turning gray
And all you wanted is slowly going away
Copyright ©
Lee
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2005-01-23 13:45:29]
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Re: The Brook
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by poet_of_anger on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:51:43 PM AEST
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| Nice, i can see how this would go together. It flows nicely, which is the most important aspect of a song. I liked it a lot. |
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Re: The Brook
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by arden on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 08:20:52 PM AEST
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awesome lee.
i need to check some of your stuff out more often.
great work
Becky |
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