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Vacum
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 08:31:59 AM in AEST
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In this foggy mist
The day sunny and clear
Oh the freshness of morning air
I set tapping with movement of my wrist
Words are locked within this space
Mother said it was between my ears
Childhood dreams and child hood fears
So many things I wish to say
Missels missels in the air
Wars and hatred everywhere
Pope John Paul
Billy Graham
Saintly men
Satan spreading error as truth
New age people believe
His message One,but not all see
Pen in hand
Friends and family pass away
Within the mind nothing stay
My hand lays down the pen
Today words I cannot find
Be it nothing out of my mind
Sinned
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Sinned
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2005-01-23 08:31:59]
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Re: Vacum
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 08:40:31 AM AEST
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I really like this. I think it's one of your best. You've encompassed so much in so few words and that makes for quite an impact.
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Re: Vacum
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:58:02 PM AEST
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| good poem sinned, but i dont see the humor in it... i guess im not in the mood to laugh anyway. |
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Re: Vacum
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by Pocket on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 03:27:29 PM AEST
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| You spelled vacuum wrong. |
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Re: Vacum
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 09:41:27 AM AEST
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i really liked this one, i notice that you tend to tie religion into your poems in someway...i like that, its not something most people do
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