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i do not love you my friend
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone2
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:22:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i dont want to write about you,
not in a state like this,
i am in a trap,
yet your'e in a state of bliss,
i dont want to even sustain a thought,
as the friends we are is all i could stay,
my feelings of love for you resemble naught,
but your feelings of true love i cannot just send away,
to me you are not a sub human,
your presence infact a gift,
its like matching a mistress to her woodman,
i dont want to be distressing,as i would hate to send you a drift,
you are my friend,
perhaps the greatest friend i hold,
romantic geustures, material things you need not to give,
i cannot keep smiling and recieving though my words have been told,
this is not how we can provail to live,
i need you and i want you,
but not as the love in my mind,
but as my back bone, my cushion when i fall,
without you my path would be empty to find,
as much as i love what you do,
i do not love you,
i cannot be with you,
i cannot love whats nothing more to me than a wonderfull companion,
as a partner a loser,
but as a friend a champion,
i cannot take it further,
it would be evil to do that to thee,
it would be a heartbraking twist,
and terrible karma for me,
dont put me in this position,
right here right now i plead guilty,
though you lust the love from me,
i cannot pretend, release me i plea,
theres things you do that make me cringe and turn,
make me stall,
make me burn,
things you say,
i laugh till your words evenesce,
i see their true meaning,
and praise you in bless,
when i kissed you on the cheek,
my skin crawled when you kissed me in reply,
i could never toutch you like that,
i would be living my life in a lie...
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in2thetwilightzone2
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2005-01-23 04:22:16]
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Re: i do not love you my friend
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:39:39 AM AEST
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| looks like you need to get away from this so call friend,good write. |
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Re: i do not love you my friend
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:25:13 AM AEST
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Well i certainly hope your not with this friend of yours. Your better than that. Great write.
Jane x |
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Re: i do not love you my friend
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:53:52 AM AEST
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wow...i found this so passionate-in the meaningful way/emotions expressed.
this is an awesome piece of writing.
BE PROUD
~keep the faith~
bluebird |
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Re: i do not love you my friend
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 07:09:03 AM AEST
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| wow thanku 4 all the comments!!!!!! dont worry i am not with him, and im not going to be. ever. hell have to understand. ive already said no to him. :D thanku every1 xxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: i do not love you my friend
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by Angelluv2write on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:03:49 AM AEST
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| Very profound. Nice write! |
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Re: i do not love you my friend
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 05:54:37 PM AEST
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| Place your bets with caution, If you don't you'll probly lose your money. |
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