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Old Shoreline
Contributed by
Bryon
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 03:21:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You came upon me like a mighty wave,
I was a barren shore of silver sand;
I thought myself a lonely, lifeless grave...
attracting you was not what I had planned.
You rose and fell majestically one day,
through drowning I discovered life anew;
the summer sun ablaze, it lit your way...
and when you crashed you made my dreams come true.
The likes of you had taunted me for years,
like teasing laps of water from a tide;
the grains of sand, they took my falling tears...
they bled me of my sense of hope and pride.
You rose and fell majestically and bold...
you brought new life, turned silver sands to gold.
Copyright ©
Bryon
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2005-01-23 03:21:13]
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Re: Old Shoreline
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:04:26 AM AEST
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| Ur poems have such a nice flow! Great write, keep it up! TD |
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Re: Old Shoreline
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by breny on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:08:08 PM AEST
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like teasing laps of water from a tide
the grains of sand, they took my falling tears
they bled me of my sense of hope and pride
beautiful...and the whole poem flows very nicely. :-D
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Re: Old Shoreline
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 01:23:50 PM AEST
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Your poem flowed like the waves upon the shores.... Great write..
Jenni |
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