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Going In Circles
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:44:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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It's like a carnival
the smell of cotton candy
whenever you smile
fascination flows
many sensations I feel,
you call to me
and I dream
cause the way you touch
it feels so real.
Then you hurt me
say you don't want me
I bring you down...
then you turn around
and change your mind,
In emotional torture
I exsist
slowly cracking
on this carousel ride,
It's spinning me
round and round
Going in circles
bouncing
like a confused clown.
In the tunnel of love
I tremble melt and flow
you moan
and softly sigh,
together we are unique
rollercoaster of emotions
get us so high.
But here we go again
you're saying
this is thee end
I start to cry...
now you're telling me
you don't want me to leave,
I'm stuck in a fun house
with so many Illusions
I am losing my mind.
In emotional torture
I exsist
slowly cracking
on this carousel ride,
It's like a carnival.
You are twisting me
round and round
and I am
Going In Circles
spinning
bouncing
like a very confused clown.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-01-23 02:44:57]
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Re: Going In Circles
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by QueenEEliz33 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:46:01 PM AEST
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| That was a really good poem, but I didnt understand what it had to do with insomnia?? |
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Re: Going In Circles
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 03:02:48 PM AEST
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| reminded me of lifehouses song sick cycle carousel. good write if i do say so myself. |
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Re: Going In Circles
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by givingin on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:46:02 AM AEST
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Well writen.
Very good.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Going In Circles
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:00:38 PM AEST
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U make me dizzy, very dizzy.
Awesome write.
One can feel every word in this write. Sspinnen round-n-round.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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