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in this world
Contributed by
karmen
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Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:14:39 AM in AEST
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In this world,
I feel hated,
not wanted, and no where near needed.
I almost feel suffocated.
In this world,
I feel so empty inside.
So lost, no where to go,
no where to hide.
In this world,
no one cares,
and to show emotion,
no one dares.
In this world,
I am just a someone,
An afraid person,
that only knows how to run.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-01-23 02:14:39]
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Re: in this world
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 02:42:25 AM AEST
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| A great write but is it really you |
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Re: in this world
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 06:11:33 AM AEST
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this is a wicked poem.-in the sense of capturing the feeling- otherwise very sad and i belive alot of ppl can relate to this.
~keep the faith~
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